My Collage Activity

The collage activity has to be one of my most favorite activities that we’ve done in class. It allowed me to express myself in a way that isn’t just “Josiah Balbi”, I was able to show my interests. It also let me show off some of my humor, although I didn’t know what was funny but also ok for me to include in my collages. For example, I made a thought bubble with a GIF (which unfortunately did not play) of a guy holding up stacks of money. The GIF is used often in the sneaker resell community, which connects to me and this english class because alot of the time during english class I am on my phone, not scrolling through social media, instead making money moves, whether thats securing a purchase of something to resell or confirming a sale, or middle manning something. I also included some gaming related things such as mario and a skeleton on a gaming setup because as a kid I was obsessed with mario games, and at one point my gaming setup looked like the one the skeleton is using. Finally, I included some music notes. Its always been difficult for me to tell people what type of music I listen to, and I don’t understand why thats the case. Alot of the time, the artists I listen to are big and trending so I can admit those, but sometimes I don’t like to claim that I listen to an underground artists music, such as Ken Carson and Destroy Lonely before they were well known, thanks to tiktok.

“The Comet”

“The Comet” by Du Bois is a science fiction story with underlying social commentary from an Afrofuturistic perspective. Sci-Fi stories often involve post-apocalyptic settings. In “The Comet”, the protagonist, a male African American, finds himself in a world where the majority of people in New York have been killed by a comet. He stumbles across a wealthy White woman, and for a brief period, they believe they are the only survivors on Earth. The two come from very different backgrounds and would have never interacted prior to the comet strike, but when faced with the end of the world and only each other to rely on, these preexisting racial and class barriers dissolve and they form a human connection. This fictional setting prompts the audience to imagine a world where racial and socioeconomic status no longer matter and consider the irrational nature of racial and class discrimination in the real world. “The Comet” therefore uses a post-apocalyptic setting commonly seen in Sci-Fi stories for rhetorical effect. 

Upon reading the text, I reconsidered the absurdity of all forms of discrimination. Oftentimes, when the privileged are stripped of their privileges, they become just average human beings. Consider social status. People are often born into the social class that they belong to for most of their life, and people of higher social status often inherit their status from their predecessors. However, without those predecessors, privileged individuals would not possess such privilege. The same goes for wealth. Wealthy people live prosperous lives, but without their wealth, they would just be average human beings as well. This was seen when the wealthy White woman in the story was forced to rely on the protagonist when her status and wealth no longer mattered and she was on an equal level with him.

Overall, it was very interesting learning about Afrofuturism and perceiving social issues from the perspective of African Americans.

Now, Then, Present

by Otish Das

After reading “How Afrofuturism Can Help the World Mend” by C. Brandon Ogbunu, it’s easy to put the dominance of Afrofuturism had a deep impact because of the message the movement had. It had an overall aspect of global healing thus in order to help with the future of humanity. It takes on issues such as social, political, and environmental. With shifting the attention to Du Bois the implement of his storytelling reflects on the racism that is very much relevant in today’s society. The story telling aspect does leave an impact that the world is yet to change, setting in an apocalyptic environment is supposed to be a sign of a call to action. Especially in an setting of New York which as everyone knows has a large demographic. Thus trying to persuade the reader in taking action in of hopes shaping a better future.

Navigating the “mobile surround”

New York City is known to be one of the “fastest” cities ever. Everyone has somewhere to be, things to do, and people to meet and they dont have time to waste for smaller things. Being a full-time student and a part-time employee, time is something I wish I had more of. Because of this, I need to already have a plan on where im trying to go and what I need to get done as soon as I get there. When it comes to writing, I need to have access to the internet and sometimes a power outlet if I need to charge my laptop. The best place for me, and im pretty sure for any other Baruch student, is the Baruch library. The library offers internet for students, outlets, even though half of them don’t seem to work. and its quiet most of the time. However, we aren’t allowed to bring outside food or drinks so if I’m on an empty stomach, I would reconsider going here. My secound go-to would be the McDonalds on 23rd street. It does get packed pretty often and can sometimes be noisy, but when its not, it is one of the best places for me to get my writing assignments, or anything else for school. They have a decently stable and fast internet connection, and they offer food and drinks, mainly coffee. They also have outlets in the back of the second floor that anyone can use. If im low on time and its getting late, obviously I would go to my home and work there. I don’t have a desk in my room thats big enough to support having multiple books on it, so I would do most of my work in the dinning room instead. Time isn’t a thing that any of us have to spare, so we have to use it to the best of our abilities.

My Brain as I write

Writing is something I like to do. I like to go into the past, think about stuff that I’d like to write about and write it down on a paper. The environment in which I write in can also depict how well I write. For example, while writing this one of my friends called me to catch up with me and I stopped at “write it down on a paper” for like 30 minutes and completely lost my train of thought. Sometimes, I need to be in my room with some sound like music or someone to talk to, in order to write properly. Other times I need to be in a school environment because at home I feel too lazy, too attracted to my bed to really write. At times, I feel uncomfortable doing work in my house because of how easily distracted I am so I’d just get to school a little early to do my work.

Technologies effect on my brain

Nicholas Carr explains in “Is Google Making Us Stupid?” some negative effects of technology. He says that he feels as if somebody is tinkering with his brain. I understand the feeling described in the reading, but I personally do not feel the same.

I’ve never been a reader. I would have books, but I just wasn’t interested in them. My mom would tell me not to play games too much, to read a book instead but I felt like “why waste my time reading a book when I can be having fun doing something else?” I just cannot focus on a book. Sometimes, reading a book for class can be engaging, I feel like I’m starting to like a book. I believe that the idea of a book that I like ending eventually is what makes me not want to finish. I would love to read books, but they must have multiple parts to it, like Percy Jackson. I loved Percy Jackson because when I finished the first one, I found out there were like 4 more after, along with 2 movies, so its like the story never had an end. After that series, its like if reading just became boring to me.

Technology’s effect on me – Blog post #2

A writing technology Dennis Baron discussed in From Pencils to Pixels is the computer. The computer allows people of all ages to write easier. I believe that using a computer, I am able to write alot better than I can when I am writing on a paper. On a computer, I am simply typing my thoughts, whereas on paper, I have to constantly click my pen/pencil to make sure I am actually writing, along with erasing or crossing out mistakes. Also, when I write a lot, my hands tend to hurt and sweat alot and I don’t like that.

Using a computer to write is not only more convenient for me, but it also allows me to do research as I write. Sometimes while writing a paper in high school, I’d forget how to spell a word, or forget the definition of a word. My high school was very strict on the no phone rule, so I’d have to just find something else to write instead. Using a computer to write, however, allows me to search up a definition of a word, or type a word in the way I think its spelt, and Google will give me the definition of the word, along with an example on how the word is used, and also correct my spelling.

My mind is going

Nicholas Carr’s commentary on search technology and the subsequent results of the convenience of said technology has stuck with me because of how much I can relate to what he is saying. The things that are happening because of how convenient it is to get information are things that people may not pay attention to, I certainly paid it no mind, until Carr spelled it out in his article.

I used to be a big reader and you could often find me in my room sitting with a book until I finish it. Recently however, even though my enjoyment of reading has not gone away, my attention span has. I find myself reading shorter stories online instead of a proper novel. I have novels at home that I would like to start, but can’t seem to find the energy or appropriate attention to do so. This is also shown in how I approach most readings for my classes. Even if the reading is interesting, I find myself just naturally skimming the page and skipping words even if I don’t mean to be doing so. I even remember asking my mother, who reads a lot of books on her kindle, how she reads so fast. How does she do it you might ask? Yup, she skims the page.

In terms of how we interact with knowledge on a daily basis, there is also the fact that instead of reading the textbook pages to help you solve a homework problem, you may google the question and find a quizlet deck with the answer. Most people cannot sit and gather information how they used to, it needs to be quick and snappy and I myself am honestly one of these people as much as I hate to admit it. Will I pick up a book sometime soon, honestly maybe. But as far as this technology goes, as Carr says “I’m not thinking the way I used to think.”

Brain’s Are Basically Computer Chips

The article does a good job explaining how the internet is rewiring our brains. I do find myself being in the same situation where I have little to no attention span anymore then I used to. Finding myself to rely on the internet and making it be a factor in my life, both personally and academically. There hasn’t been a point in my life where I didn’t go “I think I should Google it.” And Carr isn’t wrong about the long term impact, everyone will only have the mental capacity to only rely on the internet because they’re basically programmed to do it. It is scary to think how much of an impact the internet has on everyone and it’s only going to grow. No more having the energy to go to a library to find a word when you can simply do that on your phone, which would always be another factor to the low attention span because why work so hard for something where you can simply do it with a tap on the phone.

Writing with Technology

I think it’s inevitable at this point in time to incorporate technology into our writing. Personally, I find a lot of usefulness in the technologies I use for my writing. I store most of my writing on Google docs simply because this is where I started my writing. I also find websites like easybib and scribblr to make citations easier for me. I’ve had to manually form citations for tens of sources in highschool, and it’s a tedious task that these sites automate for me. I rarely use ChatGPT but I haves used it to outline long papers to identify the main points of a reading. When I need to read lots of sources, this saves me time but doesn’t cost me any understanding. Additionally, I wouldn’t have access to any “outside” sources that classes sometimes mandate for papers without a laptop or the internet. I think technology assists in the organization and the process of writing, but the rest is up to us. Most resources just save time or allow for storage.

Computers and Pencils

After reading Dennis Baron’s article, I was able to grasp a better understanding of different technologies and tools that I can utilize throughout my writing process. The two most common tools I use to help articulate my writing are a computer and a pencil. Both tools are used almost every time I write a paper or something in general. After reading, I noticed and learned that computers allow people to create their thoughts cleanly and precisely. When I use computers, I have different apps like Notes App or Excel that I can use to help present my information thoroughly with illustrations. If I have a research project, then I can find quotes or information and copy and paste them into the Notes App so that I have a list of examples to use to write my paper. When using a computer, I can type much information faster than a pencil, which allows me to articulate more information at a time. Having different accessible apps to articulate a good paper helps me tremendously. Another tool that I have used numerous times is the pencil. Using a pencil as a tool is something that I feel is very important to me when writing a paper. Something I have learned that works best for me is that when I am writing down information rather than typing, I notice that I better understand what I am writing. Everyone seems to have similar interests with different technologies to use for writing purposes, but everyone has their ideas of how they each help them.

Writing in the Digital Age

As Baron discussed, technological advancements have influenced literacy practices in recent years, especially since the widespread adoption of the computer. Technology has certainly impacted my writing practices. It provides the basis for my writing and is useful for editing and refining my work.

One application I frequently use is Google Docs. It provides a digital space to store and create my documents. I usually write my essay drafts and class notes in this application. In contrast to physical papers that can be damaged or lost over time, Google Docs is able to safely store documents for prolonged periods of time. I can retrieve my 7th grade biology assignments despite having written them years ago in a different country, something that would have been difficult to accomplish without technology. Another feature I enjoy is the synchronization between various devices. As long as I log into the same account, I can access my work from virtually any device in the world connected to the internet. In a sense, my work will always be with me and will be easily accessible. This also introduces flexibility since I can edit from my Google Docs app on my phone while laying down in bed, which would have been difficult to do using paper and pen. I also enjoy its collaborative interface that enables multiple users to edit and write simultaneously. If the writing was done on paper, it most likely be more time consuming and limit the number of editors, ultimately effecting the quality of writing. 

For similar reasons, I enjoy using the Notes app. It supports collaborative work and stores documents for extended periods of time. I still have access to the French vocabulary list I studied in middle school. Like a notepad, I can easily open the Notes app and jot down notes and ideas. I also like the simple and minimalist design of the platform. Other applications that have multiple features can be distracting when trying to focus on writing down ideas on a document, so Notes provides a simple solution to this issue. 

Lastly, I would be lying if I said I do not use AI tools for writing to some extent. When it comes to generating, summarizing and organizing ideas, applications such as Chat GPT can be very useful. They can produce excellent work in seconds, which is why many people in the work place and school have been using them. Relying on them excessively will only be detrimental to building your literacy and writing skills, but using it as a guideline and a stepping stone to continue on with a writing project can be extremely helpful. 

How technology changed my writing process

After reading this article I notice different methods of the use of technology and saw that I use it in my everyday life. I take notes whether it’s on my computer or handwrite it on my iPad. Also just checking everything through my writing assessments, notes and even my schedules. Technology really changed everything before things would be hard to write down or just take notes whenever I needed too. Plus this is very helpful if I made any mistakes with my grammar I can use an app just incase of anything. Everything is mostly in my google Docs this also helps me save a lot of time with assignments it just makes everything fast and easier for myself and others. As time goes on I know technology will advance much more and become easier in any way it can be. The more it advance it’s better for everyone and it makes things move faster as well.

Navigating Technology In My Writing

After reading Dennis Baron’s article, I recognized several technologies that fit my daily writing process. When writing, my process often consists of taking appropriate notes, making a couple of drafts, revising, and then completing my final paper. When starting my writing process, I use my Notes app to write down some of my ideas and take notes that will be useful later on. The Notes app, for me, is easy and accessible almost anywhere I am. If a good or inspiring new idea comes to mind and I am away, I can write it down quickly without waiting until I get home. If I am already home, then sometimes I will write my thoughts down on paper because I find more comfort and ease in that rather than taking out my laptop. Furthermore, I often use Google Docs or Microsoft Word when writing my drafts. Both sources include spell check and organizational tools, which help me revise my papers. Using these tools with built-in features to help me modify my work saves me a lot of time because it usually highlights mistakes I made and corrects them for me. Without these features, I would need another person to read over my paper to check my grammar, but these tools do it for me. These different technology sources help me write all my thoughts down while always being able to delete, add, or revise without restarting. As technology advances, I want to see how future students use these tools to incorporate them into their writing processes.

Discovering Different Dimensions in the fashion world


Discovery is the main entry into human intelligence.Passion drives you to want to discover,connecting your mind and heart assigning a common purpose.The learning principle that resonated the most for me in reading “What video games have to teach us about learning and literacy” by James Paul Gee was the Discovery principle.For as long as I can remember fashion has been one of my main interests and a big part of my life.I enjoy watching fashion shows,reading fashion articles and of course love browsing online looking at pieces I want in hopes to spark the manifestation.When quarantine came along in 2020 it was incredibly hard for me to feel productive.When I notice i start having too much free time day to day i like to look for things to keep me occupied.I thought to myself I love clothes,I’ve bought and sold clothes but I haven’t created them yet.After days of pondering one day I decided it was time to start creating.The easiest part for me was putting ideas onto paper and envisioning designs,the hard part was bringing them onto physical form.I didn’t know anything about manufacturers and had little knowledge about textiles and materials which are the most important things in the fashion world.I realized I needed to Discover.I was so passionate but didn’t know where to start.I tried contacting people I knew who owned their own brands to no avail.The gatekeeping was insane.I realized I had to do it on my own and that’s exactly what I did.I read articles and watched countless videos,researched manufacturers and contacted them for quotes and policies.When the math was right and I finally found a manufacturer who understood my ideas everything was so much easier.Something that seemed impossible in the beginning was finally coming into fruition for me and now i see that it would’ve never been possible without the Discovery principle adhered onto my fashion literacy.

Yoga Wisdom: Uncovering Self-Discovery and Learning Paths

“Yoga is the journey of the self, through the self, to the self.

-The Bhagavad Gita

Multiple routes

James Paul Gee’s Multiple Routes Principle summarizes that different methods are available for learning. If one is not seeing progress with a certain method, try a different method. I found this principle most relatable. For instance, in my first year of college, I was a biology major and I had no idea how I was going to study because all I have heard about this major is how difficult it is. I went to the lectures and took notes as fast as I could so I could get every piece of information from the professor. However, I realized that I was getting more and more lost after a few lectures. I was stuck on the homework assignments as well. Some of my notes were messy and I ended up not being able to understand them. After that, I tried listening to the professor without taking notes and audio recording so I could take notes later from the recording. This worked for me as I was starting to understand the lectures better. I learned that this method is best for me to learn biology since it is such a heavy course. Taking notes from the recording allows me to focus on the initial lecture. My notes were also more organized because I could control the recording. I didn’t do this for my other courses because they weren’t as difficult as biology. As a college student, I think exploring different learning strategies is important for growth and success.

What does this do?

The learning principle from James Paul Gee’s “What Video Games Have to Teach Us About Learning & Literacy” that resonated the most with how I learn, is the probing principle. When I was in middle and high school, our teachers had us take a survey to see what type of learner we are (visual, auditory, kinesthetic, etc.) so they could use that information to help accommodate the class. With these surveys, and this information was by no means new to me, I ended up being a kinesthetic/ visual learner.
This relates to the probing principle in that I need to do something and try it out to then piece the puzzle together. I am also more of a math than English person, and to do math I can’t really explain it, I need to “probe” it and see what happens so I can eventually get to the product. In a video game context, in open world games or rpg’s, etc. you will see me talk to every npc to try and pieces stuff together. At times I don’t even pay attention to tutorials in the games, mainly because a tutorial can only do so much for me. I need to form my own hypothesis or come to my own conclusion by trying it out myself.
As Gee says, probing is to do something and then form a hypothesis based on that, and then do something again. In a video game context if you try and talk to a certain character you might get a piece of the storyline. You keep that information in mind, and talk to another character to see if the story you have in your mind plays out. For the math example, I would try out one method as to how I think I could get the answer. If it doesn’t seem to be working, I adjust. Either I try something new or maybe the original method had me on the right track and I change it a little.

Practice Principle

Out of the 36 learning principals “Practice Principle” stood out to me the most because it’s something that I can relate to the most. He highlighted “Learners get lots and lots of practice in a context where the practice is not boring”. Which to me means you get to do something you love by practicing it over and over to get better and you don’t get bored because it’s something you enjoy. This is something I do everyday which are two main things for me swimming and organizing. Swimming is something that I love to do and I just want to get better everyday for myself. By organizing I get to plan everything out and with more practice I get better with organizing things around and if something goes wrong I know I would try and figure things out for myself.

Practice Can Lead To Success

After reading James Paul Gee’s work, one of the learning principles that I can connect most with would be the practice principle. This learning principle explains that with more practice and experience with the things that interest you most, you can succeed. This principle works best with me in numerous ways, including school, work, and almost everything in my life. With school, if I do not understand a topic or something going on, I would just continue practicing different problems or ask others for help until I completely understand what I am learning. The learning process can be challenging and take time, but constant practice can help you understand. With a lot of practice with things that interest you, you can provide a better outcome than a topic with no interest. For work, I would pursue as much practice as possible to try to level up at the establishment. Without trying and putting in the effort, there will not be a successful outcome; however, more effort and practice put into the job can entail a better future with something I enjoy. Also, learning something can open your mind to new ideas that may not have been thought of, and more practice and experience can help you pursue what you enjoy. We continuously learn whether we are interested or not, but with more practice, a better understanding of something can provide a successful outcome.